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		<title>Hyperlinked Writing in the Classroom- From Theory to Practice</title>
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<p>This is the follow up post to the theoretical <a title="Permanent Link to Wondering About Hyperlinked Writing" href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2012/03/31/wondering-about-hyperlinked-writing/" rel="bookmark">Wondering About Hyperlinked Writing</a>. The post ended with</p>
<blockquote><p>Now…on from the wondering, theory and resources…to the practice in the classroom.</p></blockquote>
<p>I am ready to bring hyperlinked writing (and reading) as an important genre into the classroom!</p>
<p><a href="../wp-content/uploads/2012/03/typwriter-hyperinked-writing.jpg"><img title="typwriter-hyperinked-writing" src="../wp-content/uploads/2012/03/typwriter-hyperinked-writing-400x265.jpg" alt="" width="346" height="229" /></a></p>
<p>Can one just start &#8220;throwing&#8221; hyperlinked writing&#8221; at our students (or teaches for that matter) at any time, at any age? Is hyperlinked writing part of a process? A process that starts with reading digitally, reading quality and poor samples of digital writing? Students then progress to writing comments, learning how to comment on the writing of others to learning how to write for an audience on their own blog posts. Hyperlinked writing is that next step up in writing for a an audience.</p>
<p><strong>Hyperlinked writing is more than citing your sources, it is a direct manifestation of writing for an audience.</strong></p>
<p>A quick check-in with my Common Core Guru, Mike Fisher, author of &#8220;<a href="http://itunes.apple.com/us/book/cure-for-the-common-core/id500375122?mt=11" target="_blank">Cure for the Common Core</a>&#8220;, told me that I was on the right track.  He said:</p>
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<div>You are actually addressing several capacities in what you&#8217;re describing:</div>
<div>
<ul>
<li> Capacity 3: Students respond to varying demands of audience, task, purpose, and discipline.</li>
</ul>
</div>
<ul>
<li>Capacity 5: They value evidence. (Citations are in this realm, along with curation, and it is highly connected to number 6&#8230;)</li>
<li>Capacity 6: They use technology and digital media strategically and capably.</li>
</ul>
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<p>It shows the intent to guide the reader to:</p>
<ul>
<li>where the author has been</li>
<li>his/her train of thought</li>
<li>providing a framework and context of the content background.</li>
<li>choices where to learn more</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>There are other reasons why we link digital content</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Linking is a form of Content Curation<br />
We are placing specific resources and citations in the form of a</li>
<li>Filtering and refining relevant content for our readers (<a href="http://www.briansolis.com/2011/04/the-curation-economy-and-the-three-3c%E2%80%99s-of-information-commerce/">3C&#8217;s of Information Commerce by Brian Solis</a>)</li>
<li>&#8220;The purpose of linking is to demonstrate to your audience that you are telling the truth.<br />
By means of the link, you provide your reader with the means to <em>check up</em> on you, to <em>verify</em> your claims, to follow up on the sources you <em>say</em> buttress your case, to find out if they really <em>do</em> reinforce what you are saying.&#8221; (<a href="http://www.bloodhoundrealty.com/BloodhoundBlog/?p=3086">Bloodhound Blog</a>)</li>
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<p>In the <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/blogging-commenting-rubric.pdf">Quality Blogging Rubric</a>, I developed for the use during our Quad-Blogging Action Research, links are addressed under the category &#8220;Community&#8221;. Under the &#8220;Expert&#8221;column it states that the blogger</p>
<ul>
<li>has several links that add to the readers understanding</li>
<li>has  links that are relevant and &#8220;flow&#8221; within the content.</li>
</ul>
<p>In retrospect, this description only seems to touch briefly on the importance and quality use of hyperlinks in digital writing.  <em>(Note to self: Need to upgrade the rubric)</em></p>
<p>I started out with composing a paragraph together with the 4th graders on&#8230;. yes&#8230; a piece of paper. I wanted them to see the limitations of the traditional canvas of writing. Traditional meaning that the majority of current writing in schools end up on paper (handwritten or typed and then printed out).</p>
<ul>
<li>Why do people  link in their online writing?</li>
<li>How do 9 and 10 year olds understand the use of links when they read online?</li>
<li>How can we translate this to their digital writing?</li>
<li>Understanding of linear and non-linear reading and writing</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/hyperlinked-writing.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10081" title="hyperlinked-writing" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/hyperlinked-writing-400x298.jpg" alt="" width="329" height="245" /></a></p>
<blockquote><p>We Surf The Globe</p>
<p>On our blogs, we embedded a Clustr Map. A Clustr Map is a world map on your blog, that show you the location of the visitors of our blog. The map helps us visualize there our readers are from. We have been surfing the virtual globe  to countries all around the world, such as Thailand, Switzerland, and Czech Republic, because we know that they have read our posts.</p></blockquote>
<p>I asked the students to copy the text we had written on the paper to their blog and to now add related links to the text. We discussed how the links should &#8220;flow&#8221; within the sentence and not just be &#8220;stuck&#8221; at the end, like &#8220;Click here to go to the ClustrMap&#8221;. <em>(Note: Next time type the text quickly and post on my blog, to a shared Google doc or email them to each student. So much time was lost in typing the few sentences, which could have been spent on linking instead!)</em></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/link-to.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-10075" title="link-to" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/link-to-300x145.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="145" /></a></p>
<p>I am departing from the assumption that at this point, students knew HOW to create a link on their blogging platform. This usually involves typing text, selecting and highlighting that text, clicking on a visual button (usually indicated with a chain linked together) and then entering the desired URL (Web Address) to underline and make the chosen text clickable once the post is published. Alternatively students might know or learn how to handcode a link in HTML</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/html-link-code.jpg"><img title="html-link-code" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/html-link-code-400x228.jpg" alt="" width="311" height="177" /></a></p>
<p>We watched the following video clip &#8220;<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RIMB9Kx18hw">Ethics of Linking</a>&#8221; from Jay Rosen from the New York University. He says very simply:</p>
<blockquote><p>The link, which is the idea, that you are interested in this, but did you know about THAT? Or HERE is what I&#8217;m saying, you should see what THEY are saying. You are here, but there is also this over THERE.</p></blockquote>
<p><span style="text-align:center; display: block;"><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2012/04/03/hyperlinked-writing-in-the-classroom/"><img src="http://img.youtube.com/vi/RIMB9Kx18hw/2.jpg" alt="" /></a></span></p>
<p>Take a look at <a href="http://mjgds.org/students/jamieb/surfing-the-web/">Jamie B&#8217;s</a> and <a href="http://mjgds.org/students/yonih/2012/04/02/hyper-linking/">Yoni H&#8217;s</a> blog post and how they accomplished the task. By looking at all of the other student entries, I realized, that hyperlinking is not a one-lesson task, but a skill that students have to continue to practice and develop.</p>
<ul>
<li>Some students did not add additional links beyond the one we included on the &#8220;practice paper post&#8221;.</li>
<li>Students did not go beyond adding links to other (which was the fault of not having a &#8220;better&#8221; practice paragraph) <em>Note to self- need to develop a paragraph that includes the possibility to link to a variety of sources for hyperlinks</em></li>
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<p>I did notice though, that these 4th graders were exhibiting a nice range of fluency in the logistical skills of creating links. I define this fluency as the ability to easily use the following skills and be able to adapt and change the order as and if needed.</p>
<p><strong>Logistical Skills</strong><br />
that support fluency in hyperlinked reading &amp; writing</p>
<ul>
<li>pre-viewing the URL link BEFORE clicking</li>
<li>selecting a link in a browser</li>
<li>copying a link in a browser</li>
<li>creating a link on your digital page (either with HTML code or WYSIWYG editor)</li>
<li>pasting the URL into the link code</li>
<li>opening up a new tab in your browser to switch easily back and forth between digital writing page and pages to be linked.</li>
</ul>
<p>Here are further thoughts and some activities for the classroom teacher to continue supporting and guiding his/her students in hyperlinked writing.</p>
<p><strong>Yarn Blogging</strong></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/yarn-blogging.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10082" title="yarn-blogging" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/yarn-blogging-400x294.jpg" alt="" width="348" height="256" /></a></p>
<p>Another brilliant idea from <a href="http://budtheteacher.com/">Bud Hunt</a> has been <a href="http://budtheteacher.com/blog/2006/03/11/yarn-blogging/">Yarn Blogging</a>. I recently used this technique with a group of teachers in a blogging workshop in New Zealand. The first step was for teachers to write a &#8220;blog post&#8221; on large stickie notes, then read these posts and &#8220;comment&#8221; on them by writing on small colorful stickies. The third step was for teachers to take yarn pieces and connect posts with other posts, posts with comments, comments with comments, etc.</p>
<p><em>Doing this activity with students might give them a tangible way of grasping  related content and how to connect them via a (yarn) link, not only making a connection between a name or word with a person&#8217;s website or a word&#8217;s definition.</em></p>
<p><strong>Visual Mind Mapping</strong></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/hyperlinked-writing-popplet.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10087" title="hyperlinked-writing-popplet" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/hyperlinked-writing-popplet-400x264.jpg" alt="" width="375" height="247" /></a></p>
<p>Using a mind mapping tool, such as <a href="http://www.inspiration.com/">Inspiration</a> (software), <a href="http://click.linksynergy.com/fs-bin/stat?id=UZw8YMFkgEQ&amp;offerid=146261&amp;type=3&amp;subid=0&amp;tmpid=1826&amp;RD_PARM1=http%253A%252F%252Fitunes.apple.com%252Fus%252Fapp%252Fidea-sketch%252Fid367246522%253Fmt%253D8%2526uo%253D4%2526partnerId%253D30">Idea Sketch</a> (iPad app) or <a href="http://click.linksynergy.com/fs-bin/stat?id=UZw8YMFkgEQ&amp;offerid=146261&amp;type=3&amp;subid=0&amp;tmpid=1826&amp;RD_PARM1=http%253A%252F%252Fitunes.apple.com%252Fus%252Fapp%252Fpopplet%252Fid374151636%253Fmt%253D8%2526uo%253D4%2526partnerId%253D30">Popplet</a> (iPad app) to have students create a visual of linkable words in their text. Those could be organized by connection types. Allow students to see how  a visual mind map could translate into a hyperlinked text.</p>
<p><strong>Non -Linear Writing</strong></p>
<p>Are you familiar with &#8220;<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Choose_Your_Own_Adventure">Choose Your Own Adventure Books</a>&#8220;? How great would it be to allow students to map out such a story and link the choices on a mind map showing the links, flow and connections between choices. What if they were to choose to write their own&#8221;choice story&#8221; with different plots and outcomes according to the links embedded in the text? Students could use mind mapping apps again to design a flowchart of their story.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/what2link2.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10090" title="what2link2" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/what2link2-397x300.jpg" alt="" width="377" height="285" /></a></p>
<p><strong>What to link to?</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>name &#8211;&gt; online hub (website, blog, Twitter, Facebook profile, etc.)</li>
<li>brand name &#8211;&gt; company&#8217;s website</li>
<li>word &#8211;&gt; definition</li>
<li>quote&#8211;&gt; original source</li>
<li>phrase &#8211;&gt; content context/background</li>
<li>phrase&#8211;&gt; someone else&#8217;s perspective</li>
<li>conversation &#8211;&gt; Twitter Hashtag</li>
<li>example &#8211;&gt;example in action/ demonstration of examples</li>
<li>theory &#8211;&gt; practice</li>
<li>theme/topic/concept&#8211;&gt; previous writing</li>
<li>collaborative writing pieces &#8211;&gt; pieces of another contributor to the topic</li>
</ul>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/text-links-must-telegraph-destination.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-10067" title="text-links-must-telegraph-destination" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/text-links-must-telegraph-destination.jpg" alt="" width="385" height="257" /></a></p>
<p><strong>Choosing Link Text</strong></p>
<p>Use text for your link:</p>
<ul>
<li>one-word keywords as links<br />
allow readers to skim over your writing to make a decision if they will read further</li>
<li>text is as descriptive as possible<br />
Just as the image above says, &#8220;Hyperlinked text MUST telegraph the destination&#8221;. Let readers know what content to expect when they click on the link</li>
<li>keep the amount of underlined words to a minimum.<br />
Don&#8217;t create links with link text as long as a sentence or an entire paragraph</li>
<li>embed the links within the flow of writing avoid adding a &#8220;click here&#8221;</li>
</ul>
<p>Please share your ideas of teaching hyperlinked writing in the classroom. How have you approached the genre with your age group of students? What have you learned? What are some of your trial and errors?</p>
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		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Almost 4 years ago, I wrote a post on Langwitches titled Teaching Hyperlinked Writing and Reading. 4 years later, many (most?) teachers have not heard, let alone are teaching and coaching their students in the use of hyperlinked writing. The word &#8220;hyperlinked&#8221; is still being underlined in red as I ...]]></description>
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<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/linked-1.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-10070" title="linked-1" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/linked-1.jpg" alt="" width="331" height="216" /></a></p>
<p>Almost 4 years ago, I wrote a post on Langwitches titled <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2008/10/20/hyperlinked-writing-reading/">Teaching Hyperlinked Writing and Reading</a>. 4 years later, many (most?) teachers have not heard, let alone are teaching and coaching their students in the use of hyperlinked writing. The word &#8220;<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyperlink">hyperlinked</a>&#8221; is still being underlined in red as I am typing the word, indicating that it must be somehow misspelled or that the word does not exist.</p>
<p>Wes Fryer, in his post <a href="http://www.speedofcreativity.org/2009/09/28/the-ethic-of-the-link-hyperlinked-writing-and-mainstream-media-link-hangups/">The Ethic of the Link, Hyperlinked Writing and Mainstream Media Link Hangups</a>, states that</p>
<blockquote><p>Hyperlinked writing is one of the most important topics we can address, share, and encourage educators to learn ABOUT and how to DO personally today.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>I agree with Wes and feel that there is very little headway being made to address the issue in Professional Development and in the classroom with our students. Again, <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">I believe</a> that teachers can&#8217;t teach, model and coach their students in something they have little or no experience in. <strong></strong></p>
<p><strong>What are we waiting for?</strong> Linked reading and writing is not going away&#8230;These are skills our students need&#8230;</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/time.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10068" title="time" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/time.jpg" alt="" width="283" height="194" /></a></p>
<p>Bud Hunt, in a post titled <a title="Permalink to Ruminations on Implications: Notes from the Thesis" href="http://budtheteacher.com/blog/2011/09/25/ruminations-on-implications-notes-from-the-thesis/" rel="bookmark">Ruminations on Implications: Notes from the Thesis</a>, also notices, in the case of classroom and student blogs, that there is merely a &#8220;substitution&#8221; of the traditional writing going on. His concern is that we are simply replacing traditional writing with digital writing without tapping into the transformational potential it holds.</p>
<blockquote><p>The kind of writing that’s being asked of students in these spaces?  Well, it’s interesting – I can break it down into three types – daily summaries, written collectively by elementary school classes; reflective essays about various topics; and responses to teacher questions.  Lots of it is writing that doesn’t require a blog.  And it’s writing that involves very, very, very little source material.  Very few quotes.  Very few links.  And the links, when they’re present, are not  embedded in the text.  They lie naked and open in the text.  And that seems problematic to me</p></blockquote>
<p>In another post, <a title="Permalink to Thinking ’bout Linking" href="http://budtheteacher.com/blog/2008/03/10/thinking-bout-linking/" rel="bookmark">Thinking ’bout Linking</a>, Bud wonders about</p>
<blockquote><p>teaching “blogging” vs. “writing with blogs</p></blockquote>
<p>I think Bud makes a very important distinction here. There is a difference between the two which expresses beautifully the next step I want to take in helping students become quality blog writers. It is not about substituting traditional writing, but it is about amplifying it.</p>
<p>I am asking:</p>
<p><strong>How do we help bring hyperlinked writing (and reading) as an important genre into the classroom?</strong></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/typwriter-hyperinked-writing.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10059" title="typwriter-hyperinked-writing" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/typwriter-hyperinked-writing-400x265.jpg" alt="" width="346" height="229" /></a></p>
<p>I had a brief interaction with <a href="http://www.twitter.com/terryheick">Terry Heick</a> on Twitter (please read in reverse order) and really was thankful for the perspective he shared.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked-2.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10054" title="tweet-hyperlinked-2" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked-2.jpg" alt="" width="306" height="94" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked-1.jpg"><img class="alignnone  wp-image-10053" title="tweet-hyperlinked-1" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked-1.jpg" alt="" width="305" height="187" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-10055" title="tweet-hyperlinked" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/tweet-hyperlinked.jpg" alt="" width="308" height="195" /></a></p>
<p>Terry calls it &#8220;layered writing&#8221;, I have heard it called</p>
<ul>
<li>connected writing</li>
<li>linked writing</li>
<li>hyperlinked writing</li>
<li>non-linear writing</li>
</ul>
<p>and I would like to add:</p>
<ul>
<li>amplified writing</li>
</ul>
<p>Please share your experience with hyperlinked writing.</p>
<ul>
<li>Any thoughts on how you feel about it?</li>
<li>Are the links distracting to you?</li>
<li>Do links empower you as the writer and reader of the digital text?</li>
<li>Do no links in a digital text make you cringe?</li>
<li>Feel restricted?</li>
<li>How have you incorporated hyperlinked writing int your classroom?</li>
<li>How are your students learning to express themselves via linked writing?</li>
<li>Does linking come natural to you/them?</li>
</ul>
<p>We can create a hyperlinked context around &#8220;Teaching Hyperlinked Writing,  if you leave a comment with a link on this post or leave a <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pingback">pingback</a> from a reflection on your own blog or resources you have found valuable.</p>
<p>Now&#8230;on from the wondering, theory and resources&#8230;to the practice in the classroom. Stay tuned for an upcoming blog post where I share what I learned with and from students.</p>
<p>Further Resources:</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.motive.co.nz/glossary/hyperlink.php">Definition Hyperlink</a> from Motive Web Design Glossary</li>
<li>Posts from <a href="http://budtheteacher.com/blog/category/hyperlinks/">Hyperlinks category</a> from Bud Hunt</li>
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		<title>Quality Commenting- Student Guest Post by Zoe M.</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 13:15:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>I invite few <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/category/guest-posts/" target="_blank">guest bloggers</a> to share posts on Langwitches.</p>
<p>This makes it especially rewarding to be able to present to my readers an incredible young lady. Zoe is growing by leaps and bounds as a blog writer and commenter. She is a fourth grader at the <a href="http://www.mjgds.org">Martin J. Gottlieb Day School</a> and is taking part in an <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2012/01/23/walking-the-walk-action-research/">International Action Research</a> currently underway between four blogging classrooms (USA,Thailand, Switzerland, Czech Republic). The following post is a wonderful testimonial to her understanding of blog commenting as a form of communication and learning.</p>
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<p>I am honored to be able to share Zoe&#8217;s post, since I believe many, including grown-up blogging newbies, will benefit from her advice.</p>
<blockquote><p><a title="How to Make A Quality Comment" href="http://mjgds.org/students/zoem/2012/03/16/how-to-make-a-quality-comment/" target="_blank">How to Make A Quality Comment</a> by Zoe</p></blockquote>
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<blockquote><p>When you comment on my blog I want your comments to be memorable. I want them to represent you, so even if I don’t know you, I will feel as if I do.When you comment on a blog you want it to be unique. To make it a quality comment it has to have fancy words such as instead of writing, “That is a pretty butterfly.”which is what 1st graders could do ,write” What a lovely butterfly! I love how its wings are all sparkly. I would enjoy it if you could teach me how. Did you know that a butterfly’s wing is its most fragile part?” That already is a better comment. To make a comment better, add on to the post, writing a new bit of information, it makes it a quality comment. Also, links help, if you find a website that has something to do with the topic someone is blogging about, put the link. Here is how you put a link on your blog:</p>
<p>&lt;a href=”link”&gt;words you want to be the link&lt;/a&gt;</p>
<p><strong><em>That is how you make a quality comment.</em></strong></p></blockquote>
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		<title>Action Research- Quadblogging Trailer</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Mar 2012 12:15:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>If you are interested in following the blogs of the International Action Research teams on &#8220;Quality Writing through Blogging&#8221;, take a look at the following trailer and visit the classroom and student blogs to see for yourself the progress they are making, draw your own conclusions about blogging with students.<br />
If so inclined, you can support our students by modeling quality commenting and reminding them that they do indeed have a global audience. Their writing matters!</p>
<p>Team USA- <a href="http://mjgds.org/classrooms/4thgrade/">mjgds.org/classrooms/4thgrade/</a><br />
Team Thailand- <a href="http://inside.isb.ac.th/rm204">inside.isb.ac.th/rm204</a><br />
Team Czech Republic- <a href="http://blogs.isp.cz/grade3v/">blogs.isp.cz/grade3v/</a><br />
Team Switzerland- <a href="http://stuweb.iszl.ch/Stuweb2011/Grade4/4S/4S.htm">stuweb.iszl.ch/Stuweb2011/Grade4/4S/4S.htm</a></p>
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		<title>Walking the Walk: Action Research</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 07:20:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>I have been blogging for 6 years now&#8230;</p>
<p>I have <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/category/blogging/">written extensively</a> about blogging (131 posts categorized &#8220;blogging&#8221; on Langwitches)</p>
<p>I have shared two guides for teachers to start blogging with their students</p>
<ul>
<li>“<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>”
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<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">Part III: Commenting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/17/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iv-connecting/">Part IV: Connecting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/25/2011/12/20/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-v-reciprocating/">Part V: Reciprocating</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/22/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-vi-consistency/">Part VI: Consistency</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/25/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-vii-quality/">Part VII: Quality</a></li>
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<li>Blogging Unit Plan</li>
<ul>
<li><a href="../2008/12/23/blogging-with-elementary-school-students/">1. Blogging with Elementary School Students</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/25/creating-an-outline-for-blogging-unit-plan/">2. Outline Blogging Lessons</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/25/introduction-to-blogging-lesson-plan/">3. Introduction to Blogging</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/25/blogging-lesson-plan-online-safety/">4. Online Safety</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/25/blogging-lesson-plan-commenting/">5. Commenting</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/27/blogging-lesson-plan-writing/">6. Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/30/setting-up-the-blog-and-getting-started/">7. Setting up the Blog</a></li>
<li><a href="../2008/12/25/logistics-of-formatting-a-blog-post/">8. Logistics of Formatting Post</a></li>
<li><a href="../2010/06/22/blogging-connecting-your-class-to-the-world/">9. Connecting Your Class to the World</a></li>
<li><a href="../2010/10/19/web-design-for-student-bloggers/">10. Web Design for Student Bloggers</a></li>
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<p>It is time to walk the walk&#8230;</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/back-up-tak-with-action.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9883" title="back-up-tak-with-action" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/back-up-tak-with-action-300x199.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="199" /></a></p>
<p>Let me walk the path of Action Research&#8230;. to find out if blogging:</p>
<ul>
<li>teachers, who are &#8220;actively&#8221; learning about and participating in the blogging process (beyond attending a workshop or reading &#8220;about&#8221; blogging), are setting the stage and building a solid platform for their own ongoing professional development and life long learning?</li>
<li>educators, who are blogging with their students,  can (are) learn(ing) to teach through a 21st century lens (skills &amp; literacies)?</li>
<li>improves students&#8217; writing skills?</li>
<li>motivates and engages students?</li>
<li>touches on multiple 21st century skills and literacies, as well as contribute and support learning fluency.</li>
<li>amplifies curriculum content, objectives and skills?</li>
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<p>As you can see from my questions above, I am looking for answers on three levels. One is about the benefit and learning process for the educator, another is on a student level and a the third level is from the curriculum point of view.</p>
<p>Action Research is <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Action_research">defined on Wikipedia</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>Action research</strong> – is a reflective process of progressive problem solving led by individuals working with others in teams or as part of a &#8220;community of practice&#8221; to improve the way they address issues and solve problems.</p></blockquote>
<p>Over the last few years, I have figured out that I learn better COLLABORATIVELY. My immediate reaction to &#8220;Where do I start?, was to connect and to surround myself with other educators to walk together down the path. I have also learned that collaborating or working as a group (especially with group members scattered across the globe) could <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2008/01/06/collaboration-projects-doomed-to-fail/">be hard, frustrating and often fizzled out</a>.</p>
<p>In order to move forward and to set my Action Research proposal up for success, I needed to connect with <strong>passionate</strong>, <strong>committed</strong> and <strong>dedicated</strong> educators. I wanted the framework of the research to take on the shape of  <strong>Quad Blogging</strong>.</p>
<p>Quad blogging, defined on <a href="http://quadblogging.net/">quadblogging.net</a> is a way:</p>
<blockquote><p>To deliver electrical energy of a global audience to the heart of a blog to allow a rhythm of excitement to kick via the blog’s widening global audience.</p></blockquote>
<p>Quad blogging meant to find and connect 4 educators to collaborate and conduct action research with their students.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/quad-blogging.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9880" title="quad-blogging" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/quad-blogging-385x300.jpg" alt="" width="385" height="300" /></a></p>
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<p>I was able to put together four amazing Action Research teams, ready to start the process towards the end of February. We have:</p>
<p><strong>Team USA</strong> (Martin J. Gottlieb Day School) with Andrea Hernandez (21st Century Learning Specialist),  Stephanie Teitelbaum (4th grade teacher) and myself.</p>
<p><strong>Team Czech Republic</strong> (International School of Prague) with <a href="http://learningmosaic.wordpress.com/">Nancy von Wahlde </a>(3rd grade teacher)</p>
<p><strong>Team Thailand</strong> (International School of Bangkok) spear headed by <a href="http://teachingsagittarian.com/"> Chrissy Hellyer</a> (Technology Coordinator) and Stacie Melhorn (5th Grade Teacher)</p>
<p><strong>Team Switzerland</strong> (International School of Zug and Luzern) with <a href="http://www.maggiehosmcgrane.com/">Maggie Hos-McGrane</a> (Technology Coordinator) and Dave Secomb (4th Grade Teacher)</p>
<p>We will be planning via a Google Doc and Skype, disseminating and connect our research findings via our respective professional blogs.</p>
<p>Here are some of my preliminary thoughts:</p>
<p><strong>Pre-Planning to include:</strong></p>
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<li>Pre-planning Skype meeting</li>
<li>Collaborative Google Doc</li>
<li>Identify Goals &amp; Objectives</li>
<li>Identify Obstacles/Problems</li>
<li>Identify Strategies</li>
<li>Discuss Solutions</li>
<li>Share resources and Materials</li>
<li>Data Collection:</li>
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<li>Pre-assessment (writing &amp; commenting rubric)</li>
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<li>Action Research Assessment and Evaluation:</li>
<ul>
<li>How will we measure success?</li>
<li>How will we know if we have succeeded?</li>
<li>What will we accept as evidence of success?</li>
</ul>
</ul>
<p><strong>During</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Monitoring of students writing and commenting</li>
<li>Coaching, mentoring and guiding students writing</li>
<li>Anecdotal records</li>
<li>Record student observations and behavior</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Post-Planning to include:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Debriefing Skype call</li>
<li>Post-assessment</li>
<li>Student interviews?</li>
<li>Self-assessment (students record audio of video reflection?)</li>
<li>Analyze, interpret and share results</li>
<li>Was Action Research successful?</li>
<li>What has been learned, gained and what needs improvement?</li>
<li>Reflective post on professional blogs</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://www.maggiehosmcgrane.com">Maggie Hos-McGrane</a>  wrote about <a href="http://www.maggiehosmcgrane.com/2012/01/teachers-as-leaders-part-2.html">Teachers as Leaders</a>. She referred to the <a href="http://www.teacherleaderstandards.org/downloads/TLS_Brochure.pdf">Teacher Leader Model Standards</a> that have been developed by the Teacher Leadership Exploratory Consortium. One of them being <strong>Accessing and using research to improve practice and student learning</strong>.</p>
<p>How about joining us in doing Action Research on your own, as you are blogging with your students! Find out what works and what does not and (maybe) most importantly SHARE your findings.  <strong>It&#8217;s about being active, reflective and transparent learners as we are teaching.</strong></p>
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		<title>Learning About Blogs FOR your Students: Part VII &#8211; Quality</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Dec 2011 14:45:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>This is Part VII in the series “<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>”</p>
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<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="../11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">Part III: Commenting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/17/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iv-connecting/">Part IV: Connecting</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/20/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-v-reciprocating/">Part V: Reciprocating</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/22/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-vi-consistency/">Part VI: Consistency</a></li>
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<p>Reading, responding, assessing and monitoring our students’ progress on their blog requires pedagogical commitment. It is a commitment to student learning and quality work, not a commitment to using a specific technology platform.</p>
<p>My guiding questions for QUALITY blogging are:</p>
<ul>
<li>How do teachers recognize different levels of quality?</li>
<li>How can assessment for student blogging look like?</li>
</ul>
<p>The blogging rubric, developed by Kim Cofino, mentioned in <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part IIB-Student Writing</a> becomes an invaluable tool to recognize quality, assess your students and plan to support each one at their own level. I have tweaked the original rubric somewhat. Another rubric I consulted and remixed from was <a href="http://www2.uwstout.edu/content/profdev/rubrics/blogrubric.html">University of Wisconsin</a>, as well as Steve Peha&#8217;s list of six traits of quality writing from <a href="http://www.ttms.org/writing_quality/writing_quality.htm">Teaching That Makes Sense</a>. Here is the  link to Kim&#8217;s original <a href="http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ASE-WviNjA7KZGZzczRweF8yOWZjenR4c2Z3&amp;hl=en">rubric</a>, so you can make edits to fit your own needs.</p>
<p><strong><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-rubric1.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9821" title="blogging rubric" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-rubric1-400x300.jpg" alt="" width="370" height="277" /></a><br />
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<p>Part of blogging is <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">commenting</a>, which deserves its own rubric to address individual components that contribute to the overall quality of a comment.</p>
<p><a href="http://edorigami.edublogs.org/2009/12/15/new-rubric-blog-commenting/">Andrew Churches</a> divides his <a href="http://edorigami.wikispaces.com/file/view/blogging+commenting+rubric.pdf">Commenting Rubric</a> (pdf) into two parts:</p>
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<ul>
<li>Construction – this is how the comments is constructed, its flow, logic and language</li>
<li>Understanding/Evaluations – this is a progression from simple to complex commenting; from simple statements to reflection and critique</li>
</ul>
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<p>See a commenting rubric below that you can use to help you recognize and support quality commenting. The rubric is based on Andrew Churches Bloom’ Taxonomy<a href="http://edorigami.wikispaces.com/file/view/blogging+commenting+rubric.pdf"> Commenting Rubric</a> (pdf) from above as well as  Kim Cofino&#8217;s rubric and <a href="http://www2.uwstout.edu/content/profdev/rubrics/blogrubric.html">University of Wisconsin’s Blogging Rubric<br />
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<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-rubric.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9823" title="commenting rubric" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-rubric-400x300.jpg" alt="" width="378" height="284" /></a></p>
<p>Take a look at the two videos below, produced by two third grade classes. <a href="http://mjgds.org/classrooms/3rdgrade">Mrs. Rogo&#8217;s 3d grade class </a>from Florida and <a href="http://yollisclassblog.blogspot.com/">Mrs. Yollis&#8217; class</a> from California discussed and shared their ideas and thoughts about quality commenting.</p>
<p><iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/19444542?title=0&amp;byline=0&amp;portrait=0" frameborder="0" width="375" height="225"></iframe></p>
<p><iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/15695021?byline=0&amp;portrait=0" frameborder="0" width="375" height="227"></iframe></p>
<p>Quality Commenting poster created for 3rd grade</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/Quality-Commenting.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-7906" title="Quality Commenting" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/Quality-Commenting-300x225.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="225" /></a></p>
<p>It is hard to teach/coach students in quality blogging, if the teacher does not know what quality in blogging looks like.  As mentioned in <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I- of this series</a>, blogging is about writing, but it starts with reading. Reading other blogs (<em>many different ones</em>) gives us an opportunity to see, become aware, evaluate and recognize all different levels of quality in blogs. Reading other blogs and comments helps us sharpen our own skills.</p>
<p><a href="http://edorigami.wikispaces.com/file/view/blogging+rubric.pdf"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9797" title="blogging rubric-achurches" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-rubric-achurches-208x300.jpg" alt="" width="208" height="300" /></a></p>
<p>Andrew Chuches uses Bloom&#8217;s Taxonomy very successfully to assess the quality of student blogs. I especially liked his <a href="http://edorigami.wikispaces.com/file/view/blogging+rubric.pdf">Blog Journalling Rubric</a> (pdf)  where he adds fantastic examples, demonstrating different levels of quality.</p>
<p>I believe that seeing and learning to recognize quality samples of student work in various areas of the rubrics (writing, voice, presentation, citation, community, commenting) is beneficial to educators, new to blogging with their students.</p>
<p><strong>Let&#8217;s take a look at several examples that demonstrate different levels of quality blogging.</strong></p>
<p>In the example below, you will see 4th grade students consistently (and almost exclusively) use the words &#8220;fun&#8221;, &#8220;exciting&#8221; and &#8220;amazing&#8221; as they are commenting on a blogs post that documented an author&#8217;s visit via Skype into the classroom. Some comments are incomplete, leaving the reader hanging and wondering. Students needed to elaborate further in their comments to show understanding as well as connections.</p>
<div id="attachment_7871" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 372px"><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/reflective-comments-1.jpg"><img class="size-medium wp-image-7871 " title="reflective-comments-1" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/reflective-comments-1-300x210.jpg" alt="" width="362" height="253" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Click for a larger image</p></div>
<p>After giving students feedback on their first comments, they went back to re-submit their comments. Take a look and compare these two before-and-after examples.</p>
<div id="attachment_7973" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 380px"><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/upgrade-4th-blogging-comments-reflective.jpg"><img class="size-large wp-image-7973" title="upgrade- 4th-blogging comments reflective" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/upgrade-4th-blogging-comments-reflective-333x325.jpg" alt="" width="370" height="361" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Click on the image to see a larger version.</p></div>
<p>Here are a few more comments left by teachers, pre-service teachers  and other adults. These comments are well intended. They surely were left to make conversation, let the blog author know that their posts are being read, acknowledged and appreciated. How would they hold up against the commenting rubric?</p>
<ul>
<li>Do these comments contribute to the topic of the original blog post (Even without having seen the original blog post&#8230;) ?</li>
<li>Is there evidence of understanding of topic of original blog post?</li>
<li>Are links to relevant resources added?</li>
<li>Is there a meaningful addition (information, point of view)?</li>
<li>Is an idea or point of view well stated?</li>
<li>Is there solid evidence of content knowledge or thinking present?</li>
</ul>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commentex.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-9806" title="commentex" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commentex.jpg" alt="" width="247" height="111" /></a></p>
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<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-1.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9802" title="comment-examle-1" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-1-400x69.jpg" alt="" width="400" height="69" /></a></p>
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<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-2.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9803" title="comment-examle-2" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-2-400x42.jpg" alt="" width="400" height="42" /></a></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-3.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9804" title="comment-examle-3" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-3-400x95.jpg" alt="" width="400" height="95" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-4.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-9805" title="comment-examle-4" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/comment-examle-4.jpg" alt="" width="337" height="66" /></a></p>
<p>What about these comments below? Where would they fall in your opinion?</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/quality-comment.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9832" title="quality comment" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/quality-comment-320x300.jpg" alt="" width="320" height="300" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://yollisclassblog.blogspot.com/2011/08/learning-how-to-comment.html">Linda Yollis</a>, winner of the 2011 Edublog Awards in the categories of Best Classroom Blog &amp; Most Influential Blog Post left the following <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/20/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-v-reciprocating/comment-page-1/#comment-61026">comment on Langwitches</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>Silvia, you’ve hit the nail on the head…quality reciprocation is the key to building an audience! All the blogging relationships I’ve built with teachers, classrooms, and students have come from reciprocal commenting.</p>
<p>Teachers often ask me how I have connected with so many classes around the world. The answer is through <em>consistent</em> quality commenting. When I started, I would visit lots of blogs and leave comments. I’d try to make a connection or add relevant information to a post, and I’d always end with a question. My hope was to engage the class in a conversation. If I would get a reply from the teacher/class, I would go back. If I got no response, I’d move on to other blogs and keep trying.</p>
<p>Many teachers/classes not only responded in <em>their</em> comment section, but they would visit my class blog and connect. A comment that shows you’ve read the post and are interested in what’s happening in the classroom is much more valuable than “Our class loves your blog, please visit ours!” Of course, composing thoughtful comments takes time, but the payoff is tremendous!</p>
<p>One of the first teachers I connected with was Kathleen Morris (@kathleen_morris). Through reciprocal quality commenting, we’ve built a relationship that spans four classes. Students regularly comment to each other, and two families from Kathleen’s Australian class visited our class when they vacationed in Los Angeles!</p>
<p>I teach third grade and when my students earn their own blogs, they are excited to get that first red ClustrMap dot and a comment or two. I teach dedicated lessons about <a href="http://yollisclassblog.blogspot.com/2011/08/learning-how-to-comment.html" rel="nofollow">how to comment</a><br />
using our class blog, so by the time students have their own blogs, they have a good understanding of composing a quality comment.</p>
<p>Before too long, I will hear a student complain, “No one is commenting on my blog.” My response to them is, “Hmm…well…whose blog have you been commenting on? Where did you leave your last comment?” They look a little sheepish as the light bulb goes on. In life, <strong>you have to give to get.</strong> If you want people visiting and connecting with you, you have to get out there and model what you want!</p>
<p>Focusing on a few blogs is a good idea. It can be overwhelming to try and keep up with too many classes. Deputy Mitchell’s (@DeputyMitchell) Quadblogging idea is a great place to begin. <a href="http://quadblogging.net/" rel="nofollow">http://quadblogging.net/</a></p>
<p>There are so many wonderful global projects springing up. It’s tempting to join too many. I have found that if I over-schedule my class, we are not able to participate fully and that doesn’t help anyone. Budgeting your time and choosing projects that fit your schedule makes blogging and global projects more meaningful and enjoyable.</p>
<p>Finally, I love your idea about mentoring student bloggers. Edublog’s Student Blogging Challenge is a wonderful place to volunteer your time. Following the Twitter hashtag #comments4kids is another way to support students.</p>
<p>As you can see, I am passionate about educational blogging! I thank you, Silvia, for guiding and encouraging teachers to blog. It’s the best project I’ve seen in my twenty-five years in the classroom!</p></blockquote>
<p>Please don&#8217;t just notice the length of the comment compared to the others, but take a look at writing, voice, content and presentation. Ask yourself, if:</p>
<ul>
<li>this comment contributed further information on the blog&#8217;s topic (The role of reciprocation in blogging)?</li>
<li>the comment&#8217;s author added further resources?</li>
<li>the content was organized and easy to follow?</li>
<li>the author&#8217;s voice came through?</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>We need to be reading AND consciously reflecting on the quality of a blog post or comment to become good at recognizing and guiding our students to quality work in blogging.</strong></p>
<p>Below you will find samples of blog posts. While keeping the blogging rubric in mind, how would you evaluate them? Where does the blog author need to improve?</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-9812" title="blogging-sample" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample.jpg" alt="" width="353" height="488" /></a></p>
<p>Spelling, grammar and punctuation would be something to work on for this student (proof reading and editing). The visual formatting of the body of text could also use improvement. I am not sure if the link included in the post was supposed to cite the author&#8217;s source of information or be the image credit. Once I followed the link, I discovered that the site (and therefore I have to assume the image as well)  is under copyright. Simply adding the link to the site where the image was found is not enough.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample-1.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9810" title="blogging-sample-1" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample-1-400x118.jpg" alt="" width="368" height="109" /></a></p>
<p>I liked the inviting title to the blog post. It made me curious to continue reading. The post author starts out describing a personal experience. I am left with wishing for more information. A link to Wikipedia, for example, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golfer%27s_elbow">explaining the condition</a>, would have been inviting to learn more. A <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Gray329-Medial_epicondyle_of_the_humerus.png">visual</a> in the public domain (free to use), grabbed from Wikipedia would have also been a nice addition. I am left with many questions for this blog author. His writing left me unsatisfied. I don&#8217;t feel that he told a &#8220;whole&#8221; story.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample2.jpeg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-9813" title="blogging-sample2" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/blogging-sample2.jpeg" alt="" width="386" height="1315" /></a></p>
<p>The blog post above is from my favorite fourth grade blogger <a href="http://victoria-miriamsmoments.blogspot.com/">Miriam</a>. She was a finalist in this year&#8217;s <a href="http://edublogawards.com/">Edublog Awards</a>. What I love about her writing, is that I can HEAR her voice so clearly (although I have never met her personally). In the above post, she takes her readers along a car ride as she observes the autumn trees changing colors. She takes images of the trees she sees and inserts them into her blog post in order support her writing. The post is not only a narrative, but Miriam weaves information into the post as well. Miriam closes her blog post with question directed at the reader, inviting them to continue a conversation or information exchange.</p>
<p>Take a look at the <a href="http://edublogawards.com/">Edublog Awards </a>nominees as well as the <a href="http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/">Student Blogging Challenge</a>. There are literally hundreds of links to student and classroom blogs. With the blogging and commenting rubric in hand, evaluate a few (or many) of them:</p>
<ul>
<li>what do you like?</li>
<li>what components do you consider &#8220;QUALITY&#8221;</li>
<li>what could be improved?</li>
<li>how would you coach that student?</li>
<li>how would you transfer the learning opportunity to your own classroom?</li>
</ul>
<p>Once you have unofficially &#8220;audited&#8221; several classroom and student blogs, it will give you a better idea and more confidence in recognizing and gauging quality in your own students&#8217; blogging.</p>
<p>Please share:</p>
<ul>
<li>your own auditing methods and successes for quality blogging with students</li>
<li>an audit of a student blog post you conducted (this could be a great next blog post to tackle!)</li>
</ul>
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<p>This is Part VI in the series “<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>”</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">Part III: Commenting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/17/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iv-connecting/">Part IV: Connecting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/20/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-v-reciprocating/">Part V: Reciprocating</a></li>
</ul>
<p>I have seen many teachers start blogs (professional and classroom ones), only to abandon them after a short while. The reasons are many:</p>
<ul>
<li>it takes too much time</li>
<li>writer&#8217;s block</li>
<li>no one reads it anyway</li>
<li>students are complaining of having to write so much</li>
<li>can&#8217;t see the benefits for student learning</li>
</ul>
<p>By now, we should understand that blogging is not about technology, but about literacies (old &amp; new) and LEARNING. Following the guidelines described in the <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">previous parts </a>of this series, blogging can bring the benefits highlighted therein WITH the understanding that reeking these benefits will <strong>take</strong> <strong>time</strong>.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/time-circle.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-8308" title="Infinity time spiral" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/time-circle-300x178.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="178" /></a></p>
<p>The word &#8220;blogging&#8221; is in progressive form (the &#8220;-ing&#8221; form). The <em>progressive form</em> of a verb is the form that is used to indicate that an action is continuing/ on-going.</p>
<p><strong>Blogging is a process, not an event that happens as a culminating activity of a lesson or unit.</strong></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/consistency1.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9779" title="consistency" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/consistency1-300x223.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="223" /></a></p>
<p>The realization and acceptance of blogging as a platform for learning AND as a process, brings in the component of <strong>CONSISTENCY</strong>.</p>
<ul>
<li>Consistency is the key most bloggers list as the reason for successful blogs</li>
<li>Consistency applies to reading, writing, commenting and connecting!</li>
</ul>
<p>Consistency constitutes an important building block:</p>
<ul>
<li>to establish trust</li>
<li>to build a relationship with your readers</li>
<li>to build a loyal readership (you want your visitors to make it a habit of reading your work)</li>
<li>to experience the cognitive process of learning over a period of time</li>
<li>to plan, develop, build and maintain a classroom learning community</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://yollisclassblog.blogspot.com/">Linda Yollis</a>, winner of the 2011 <a href="http://edublogawards.com/">Edublogs Awards</a> in the category &#8220;Best Classroom Blog&#8221; recommends,  in a comment she left on my previous post <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/20/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-v-reciprocating/">Part V: Reciprocating</a>,</p>
<blockquote><p>Teachers often ask me how I have connected with so many classes around the world. The answer is through <em>consistent</em> quality commenting</p></blockquote>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-consistency.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9790" title="stepping it up-consistency" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-consistency-232x300.jpg" alt="" width="232" height="300" /></a></p>
<p>So, in order to give yourself the best possible chance in making your blog (professional or classroom blogs) a success, prepare yourself and your students to be CONSISTENT!</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Don&#8217;t let your blog be an add-on</strong><br />
The easiest way to have your blog become neglected is to treat it as something in addition to &#8220;all the other things you already do&#8221;. Find ways to <em>replace</em> traditional tasks.</li>
<li><strong>Use your blog as a tool to &#8220;do the things you do&#8221;</strong><br />
Your blog can be your communication and planning tool. It is also a tool to teach and support your curriculum : reading, writing and 21st century literacies (media, network, global, information).</li>
<li><strong>Let your blog be your hub</strong><br />
Plan, document, reflect and showcase your (or students&#8217;)  work on your blog. Make it your  space and the center of all your work. Link all your other online spaces to your blogs (wikis, social bookmarks, twitter, etc.)</li>
<li><strong>Build in regular times to read blogs</strong><br />
It is a conscious decision and effort to continue your own professional learning. <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Blogging starts with reading</a>. Reading will give you ideas and topics to write about. Make reading blogs easy and convenient, by adding their feeds to an RSS reader and/or to your mobile devices via apps (ex. <a href="http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/flipboard/id358801284?mt=8">Flipboard</a>, <a href="http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/zite-personalized-magazine/id419752338?mt=8">Zite</a>, etc.) Read whenever you get a chance during the day and for a set amount of time before you go to bed at night. Read as well when your students have free reading time at school. (<a href="http://dropeverythingandread.com/">D.E.A.R. time</a>)</li>
<li><strong>Build in regular times to write posts<br />
</strong>Do you have a D.E.W (Drop Everything and Write) time in your classroom?<br />
<a href="http://citl.hbg.psu.edu/cawp/QW/dispLP.cfm?LessonPlanID=51">DEW time</a> is essentially a daily “free write” time. This has been THE single MOST effective strategy we have used to build fluency in writing&#8221;.<br />
Write right alongside your students<strong>. </strong>Modeling is one of the best teachers.</li>
<li><strong>Build in regular times to comment<br />
</strong>Comment on your students&#8217; blogs to build conversation. Comment on other blogs from around the world and about a variety of topics in order to build traffic and connections. Comment as a class to model and coach your students. Make this a time for mini-lessons in writing,  vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, etc.</li>
<li><strong>Be consistent in making connections<br />
</strong>(content and relationship wise) with and for your students. Don&#8217;t give up if a connection or blogging collaboration project does not work out. With time, you will build trusting and reliable relationships. Don&#8217;t be discouraged if comments don&#8217;t come flooding in. Keep it up&#8230;with time they will come.</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/consistency-blogging.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9789" title="consistency-blogging" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/consistency-blogging-130x225.jpg" alt="" width="130" height="225" /></a></p>
<p>Don&#8217;t give up blogging after a few weeks! Hang in there. Remember it is a process and takes time.</p>
<ul>
<li>Reflect often</li>
<li>What works for you and your students?</li>
<li>What does not work?</li>
<li>What needs to be tweaked, thrown out, revised?</li>
<li>Connect with other educators who are blogging.</li>
<li>Read, read, read other professional, classroom and student blogs</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>How have you been successful in consistently reading, writing, commenting and connecting on and via your blog?</strong> What successful tips can you share with teachers just beginning the process?</p>
<p><strong>If you are a newbie, how do you envision making a &#8220;commitment to consistency&#8221; work in your case?</strong></p>

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		<title>Learning About Blogs FOR your Students- Part V: Reciprocating</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Dec 2011 16:25:57 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>This is Part IV in the series “<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>”</p>
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<li><a href="../2011/12/17/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/17/2011/11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/17/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">Part III: Commenting</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/17/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iv-connecting/">Part IV: Connecting</a></li>
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<p>In a previous blog post, I talked about the importance of <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/17/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iv-connecting/">connecting</a> your students&#8217; blogs to others in order to:</p>
<ul>
<li>keep motivation and engagement to writing high</li>
<li>communicate with an audience in a digital world via text, images, video and audio</li>
<li>connect with a global audience, across age levels, geographic and timezone boundaries</li>
<li>connect with peers and experts in specific subject areas or a wide range of areas of interest</li>
</ul>
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<div>In order to achieve any of these goals, we need to partner and rely on others. That is actually the point: Give our students an audience that is greater than one, others beyond their teacher&#8230;</div>
<div>So the big question remains:</div>
<div><strong>How do you reach that QUALITY and CONSISTENT connection with others beyond that one time project or one or two blog posts?</strong></div>
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<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/reciprocating-boomerang.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9762" title="reciprocating-boomerang" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/reciprocating-boomerang-300x225.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="225" /></a></p>
<p>So, if we are relying, even expect others (educators, mentors, etc.) to take the time to comment on OUR students’ blogs, we need to be prepared to <strong>reciprocate</strong>. It is a give and take. You will get the effort you put into reciprocating back.</p>
<p>The <a href="http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/reciprocate">Merriam-Webster Dictionary</a> defines the word <strong>reciprocate</strong> as:</p>
<blockquote>
<div>1<strong>:</strong> to give and take mutually</div>
<div>2<strong>:</strong> to return in kind or degree</div>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Reciprocating is one of the most important components to make blogging with your students, as a global communication tool, work.</p>
<p><strong>If we want our students to have an audience, we need to be the audience for others</strong>.</p>
<p>It is a cycle that needs to renew itself.  We need a commitment from teachers (who are blogging with their students) to contribute to that cycle, otherwise it will come to a screeching halt. By &#8220;it&#8221; , I mean the connections, conversation and amplification we are seeking via blogging for our students.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-reciprocating.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9768" title="stepping it up-reciprocating" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-reciprocating-236x300.jpg" alt="" width="236" height="300" /></a></p>
<p>Reciprocation can take on the form of:</p>
<ul>
<li>taking regular time to leave comments on other student blogs</li>
<li>teach your students to leave<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/"> quality comments</a> on other blogs with a link back to their own blog</li>
<li>be trustworthy and reliable when in a blogging project or partnership with other educators</li>
<li>take ownership of the quality of blog writing and commenting your students exhibit when connecting with others</li>
<li>formally volunteer to be a mentor teacher for other blogging classes or students</li>
</ul>
<p>In a <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/16/curriculum21-podcast-episode-with-vicki-davis-and-julie-lindsay/">podcast interview</a>, I recorded with Vicki Davis and Julie Lindsay, Vicki shared one of the components of a successful global collaboration project. She talked about the commitment from all teachers involved, the commitment to accept the students from someone else as your own.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/taking-under-wings.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9763" title="taking-under-wings" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/taking-under-wings-300x204.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="204" /></a></p>
<p>I believe that this is key. The reward as an educator comes from teaching others&#8230;not just the ones that are listed on your class roll. Your students will benefit as well, when other educators reciprocate to take your students under their wings. It is about teaching through the walls of our physical classroom!</p>
<p><strong>What do you think about the importance of reciprocation when involved in student blogging?</strong></p>
<p><strong>How can your reciprocation contribute to the success of student blogging?</strong></p>
<p><strong>What shape has reciprocation taken on in your blogging adventure or how do you envision it for the future?</strong></p>
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		<title>Learning About Blogs FOR your Students- Part IV: Connecting</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Dec 2011 04:26:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Silvia Tolisano</dc:creator>
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<p>This is Part IV in the series “<a href="../2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>”</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="../2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="../2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/12/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-iii-commenting/">Part III: Commenting</a></li>
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<p>As a teacher,</p>
<ul>
<li>you have started reading blogs in order to get ideas, inspiration and format from other writers and educators&#8230;</li>
<li>you have content that sparks your own interest and that you are able to connect to in your own writing&#8230;</li>
<li>you are going through the &#8220;process of writing&#8221; for yourself, in order to coach your students in becoming better writers&#8230;</li>
<li>you have started leading your students in writing on their own blogs&#8230;</li>
<li>you are modeling conversations, critical thinking and connections by commenting on your students&#8217; blog.</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Now&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>you are realizing that your students are NOT necessarily jumping up and down for you, eager to get to work in order to consistently produce high quality writing. Motivation to get on the blog, blinging it up and producing content might have happened for a brief period right after you started blogging.</p>
<p>The newness wore off fast for these digital natives and now it is (most likely with only a few exceptions among your students) nothing more than school work on a digital platform instead of school work with paper and pencil.</p>
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<p>An integral component to keep it exciting and fresh for your students (and yourself too) is to:</p>
<p><strong>Make a conscious effort to CONNECT your students to an audience beyond the teacher.</strong></p>
<p>An authentic global audience for our classroom or individual student blogs does not happen on its own. I have been thinking, researching and experimenting  <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2010/06/22/blogging-connecting-your-class-to-the-world/">how to connect classrooms to a global audience</a> for a while now.</p>
<p>In my opinion, it comes down to YOU, as the teacher, to make a commitment to:</p>
<ul>
<li>be the <em>connector</em> for your students (especially younger ones) or</li>
<li>teach them how to reach out on their own.</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/directing-traffic-to-student-blogs.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-9747" title="directing-traffic-to-student-blogs" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/directing-traffic-to-student-blogs-300x199.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="199" /></a></p>
<p><strong>How does a teacher drive traffic to his/her students’ blogs in order to connect them to an audience?</strong></p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Blogging Buddies</strong><br />
Connect with blogging buddies (formerly known as pen-pals).<br />
Find another committed classroom teacher who is blogging. They can be from your own building, district, state, or from another country.<br />
(Leave your contact info and blog details on <a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0Aq4KtYNzXPFBdENyVm5KeXRyU3dHeFg0SGRVVmEtQ2c&amp;hl=en_US#gid=0">this Google Doc</a> started by Kim Cofino, if you are looking for blogging buddies for your students)</li>
<li><strong>Quad-Blogging</strong><br />
Become part of a<a href="http://quadblogging.net/"> Quad-Blog</a>. Make a connection via the site or organize yourself with three other classroom teachers from your own network.</li>
<li><strong>Blogging Projects</strong><br />
Join pre-existing blogging projects (<a href="http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/">Student Blogging Challenge</a>)</li>
<li><strong>Twitter<br />
</strong>Tweet about exemplary student posts to your network.<br />
Use hashtag <a href="https://twitter.com/#%21/search/%23comments4kids">#comment4kids</a> (more i<a href="http://comments4kids.blogspot.com/">nfo about comments4kids</a>)</li>
<li><strong>Cross-Posting, Linking and Commenting<br />
</strong>Cross-post student posts and link them on your professional blogs. Leave relevant comments on other blogs with links back to your classroom and/or student blogs.</li>
<li><strong>Experts</strong><br />
Invite &#8220;content experts&#8221; of a unit your are studying or specific area of student interest to write a guest blog post or become a guest commenter</li>
<li><strong>Mentors</strong><br />
Ask a university professor to connect your classroom or student blogs to a group of pre-service teachers. This can be a win-win situation for everyone involved.</li>
<li><strong>Parents</strong><br />
Educate and ask parents to take the time to read and comment on the classroom or their student&#8217;s blog<br />
(Idea: Have students create a &#8220;How-to-Video&#8221; walking their parents through the steps of leaving a comment and give advice on quality comments)</li>
</ul>
<p>How do YOU connect your students to a larger audience than one? What has worked for you?  Please share.</p>

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<p>This is Part III in the series &#8220;<a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/23/coming-soon-stepping-it-up-learning-about-blogs-for-your-students/">Stepping it Up: Learning About Blogs FOR your Students</a>&#8221;</p>
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<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/10/29/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-i-reading/">Part I: Reading</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/11/26/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-writing/">Part II A: Writing</a></li>
<li><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">Part II B: Student Writing</a></li>
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<p>In Part III , I am exploring <strong>COMMENTING</strong> on blogs.</p>
<p>Commenting is a great introduction to <a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/2011/12/11/learning-about-blogs-for-your-students-part-ii-b-student-writing/">student writing</a> on blogs. It does not require to plan and write an entire blog post. Commenting could be used as a stepping stone for students to &#8220;earn&#8221; the right to author their own blog posts on a classroom blog or before they get to be administrators of their own student blog. I have seen teachers require a certain number of &#8220;moderated&#8221; comments before students &#8220;graduate&#8221; to be able to post comments without prior approval. The same teacher then requires a certain number of quality &#8220;unmoderated&#8221; comments, before the students gets promoted to becoming an author on the classroom blog.</p>
<p>Even with classmates or commenters from around the world leaving comments, WE ARE our students’ first and primary commenters. When we comment on our students’ blogs, we model quality writing AND content as well as encourage them to expand their own horizons to make connections in the online world.</p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-commenting.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9708" title="stepping it up-commenting" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/stepping-it-up-commenting-233x300.jpg" alt="" width="233" height="300" /></a></p>
<p>It takes <strong>time </strong>to learn how to become a quality commenter FOR our students. We, as teachers, need to</p>
<p><strong>Model commenting</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Read comments (&#8230;lots of comments) to learn to distinguish between poor, mediocre and quality comments.</li>
<li>Model commenting to your students by leaving QUALITY comments on their blogs</li>
<li>Avoid comments, such as &#8220;Great job&#8221;, &#8220;Way to go&#8221;, or &#8220;I really liked what your wrote&#8221;&#8230;</li>
<li>Commenting is about continuing a conversation started in a blog post.</li>
<li>Commenting is about helping to (potentially) push the author of the post in a new direction, give a new perspective or connect them to new resources.</li>
<li>Commenting is about relating the thoughts, ideas, experiences or resources of the blog author to your own. Sharing them will paint a better picture of the issue, perspectives, or research.</li>
<li>Ask yourself if your comment CONTRIBUTED to the conversation, the learning of the author or other readers?</li>
<li>21st century skills include critical thinking, problem solving and QUESTIONING. The comment section of a blog is a great place to practices these skills in an authentic environment.</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Model writing</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Use traditional writing conventions (grammar, word choices, audience appropriate,etc.)</li>
<li>Add digital writing conventions (<a href="http://theedublogger.com/2009/02/19/writing-links-in-comments/">linking</a>)</li>
<li>Integrate reflective writing</li>
<li>Compose and publish comments together as a class by projecting the blog post</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Model proper grammar, etc.</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>When you see a student misspell a word or publish a grammatically incorrect sentence, model correct spelling and grammar in your comment to the post</li>
<li>As a class, go through comments in moderation and edit together</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Take the time to discuss and reflect on comments left by others</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>It is the perfect time to upgrade and replace traditionally taught lessons.</li>
<li>Teach writing in an authentic setting.</li>
<li>Engage in conversation with an authentic global audience.</li>
<li>Deliver &#8220;just in time&#8221; mini lessons, as teaching opportunities pop up unexpectedly</li>
<li>Model by responding to or continuing a conversation</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>Know the difference between academic and social commenting</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Students (and teachers) are most likely accustomed to commenting via text messages on their cellular devices and on friends&#8217; Facebook walls.</li>
<li>Teachers need to be aware of the difference between these &#8220;social comments&#8221; versus academic commenting</li>
<li>Recognize when students are falling into social comments and coach them to academic commenting.</li>
</ul>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-social.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-9714" title="commenting-social" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-social.jpg" alt="" width="365" height="378" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-academic.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-large wp-image-9713" title="commenting-academic" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/commenting-academic-400x270.jpg" alt="" width="346" height="246" /></a></p>
<p><strong>Craft an acceptable commenting etiquette tailored to YOUR classroom&#8217;s need</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>Your classroom blog is an extension of your physical learning space and community.</li>
<li>The age of your students, special needs and personality play a role in creating an acceptable commenting etiquette that works for your classroom.</li>
<li>It is important to discuss and enlist the help of your students in crafting your etiquette</li>
</ul>
<div id="attachment_9715" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 276px"><a href="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/4th-grade-commenting-etiquette.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-9715" title="4th grade-commenting-etiquette" src="http://langwitches.org/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/4th-grade-commenting-etiquette.jpg" alt="" width="266" height="293" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">4th Grade Commenting Etiquette</p></div>
<p>As a teacher, becoming a quality commenter is imperative to be able to guide and coach your students in becoming better academic commenters.</p>
<p>Need a playground to practice your own comment skills. Follow the Twitter Hashtag <a href="https://twitter.com/#!/search/%23comments4kids">#comments4kids</a> and leave quality comments for student bloggers from around the world.</p>
<p>The more YOU practice&#8230;the better commenter you will become&#8230; the better you can coach your students in becoming good writers in the digital writing world.</p>

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